an english poem :)
salamo 3alukum i'm new here and my friend told me abt this gorgeous forum :rolleyes: i write english pomes so i thought abt sharing it with u and know ur openions hope u like it and thnx for reading :)
Last beat. Lup dup…Lup dup My heart beat stopped. I woke up and found Many people gathering around It seems that I am dead They are all crying loud Oh God! I'm in a great perdition No more chances Too late for submission My life is full of sins So how am I going to stand between your Hands? How am I going to face You? If I took my book with my left hand? How did I keep talking to my friends? And forget to pray the dawn None of my friends is with me now I am dead and all alone. How can I be such a fool? And didn't realize everything You gave to me How can I be so cruel? And don't thank You for what You did to me Wish I could turn back time And do my best to go to heaven It's too late to regret But...can I still be forgiven? Lup dup…Lup dup... My heart beats again Thanks God it was just a dream So please forgive my sins My Merciful Lord Thank You for Your bless Thank You for giving me another chance And reminding me of death. |
aslam 3likom
ahlaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan ya shams:10: im so happy with your lovly poem you know i like it so much...............nice work dear may ALLAH reward u the best sweety and i wanna see your work ....................:049: .in ALLAH |
aslam alikom sister in god"nour ashams"
realy i enjoy reading every word in this poem may allah bless you realy good work....go on and best regards for you wellcome to our forum to your second home between your brother and sisters in god |
dear sister nour el shams
this poem is very nice go on and we will wait all works may allah reward you |
in the name of god
really it is avery nice poem god bless you good job my sistre with all my love in god |
thnx alot sisters i never thought of getting any replies tht means alot to me and i'm so happy u liked it God bless u all
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aslam 3likom
realy good work....go on good job my sister |
well i see a new talented one here
i like your poem so much espically the opening keep going girl god bless you |
keep it going sis
nice poem waiting for ur poems alawys thanks sis |
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